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Thursday, 8 June 2017

Title
                                                Baby Bear   
Orientation
Baby bear decides to rush up the hill Mum and baby bear went outside their home to start hunting. They have to go into the water to get fish. the  baby bear climbed  on the cliff. Mum bear was looking for fish to eat. Baby bear climbed the cliff because he was going to swim and catch fish for mum and for baby bear. Mum shouted  at baby bear. Baby bear was very nervous when mum bear shouted to baby bear. They were going home.




Problem

Baby bear wants to climb a cliff because he wants to jump in the sea to get more fish from the sea.  Mum is going to get  angry at baby bear. Mum will get angry like a fierce lion. Baby  was getting worried because he was fooling  in the sea. Baby bear was very scared to tell the truth about fooling in the sea. A seal  started to chase baby bear. Baby bear was scared because he can get swim fast enough to get away from the Seal.
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Solution

Mum bear jumped into the water to catch baby bear. The water was freezing cold like ice. She swam to baby bear and gave him a big hug. Mum bear told baby bear off. The seal got smacked by Mum bear and the seal went back to his home. Mum and baby bear went hunting for fish together.


1 comment:

  1. Hello Pua My name is Angel and i goto Tamaki primary School I really like the way you used Adjectives with Your writing it is a beautiful story i love the words that you used

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