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baby bear
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Baby bear decides to rush up the hill Mum and baby bear went outside their home to start hunting. They have to go into the water to get fish. the baby bear climbed on the cliff. Mum bear was looking for fish to eat. Baby bear climbed the cliff because he was going to swim and catch fish for mum and for baby bear. Mum shouted at baby bear. Baby bear was very nervous when mum bear shouted to baby bear. They were going home.
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Problem
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Baby bear wants to climb a cliff because he wants to jump in the sea to get more fish from the sea. Mum is going to get angry at baby bear. Mum will get angry like a fierce lion. Baby was getting worried because he was fooling in the sea. Baby bear was very scared to tell the truth about fooling in the sea. A seal started to chase baby bear. Baby bear was scared because he can't swim fast enough to get away from the Seal.
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mum bear dave under the water to catch baby bear. but baby bear got slipped and hit by jagged ice and he landed in his front balie. he fell very heart. mum bear climbed out from the cliff. mum bear was looking for baby bear. mum bear sore baby bear got hit by jagged ice and made a big crack in front in his balie. mum bear was unconscious.
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Solution
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Mum bear jumped into the water to catch baby bear. The water was freezing cold like ice. She swam to baby bear and gave him a big hug. Mum bear told baby bear off. The seal got smacked by Mum bear and the seal went back to his home. Mum and baby bear went hunting for fish together.
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I was a Year 7 student at Panmure Bridge School in Auckland, NZ. I was in Learning Space 2 and my teacher is Mrs Anderson.
Monday, 19 June 2017
Baby Bear
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