L.I Today for inquiry we had to do world war 1. We have to
do the trench warfare. We have to talk about the world war
one then we have to write a information about the trench
warfare in world war one.
Hi Pua, You have a good DLO but you should write more on your blurb. Was it a individual task, or with a partner? You should also say how you got the information? What kind of information did you write about the Trench Warfare? You also have some mistakes in your blurb.
Hi Pua,
ReplyDeleteYou have a good DLO but you should write more on your blurb. Was it a individual task, or with a partner? You should also say how you got the information? What kind of information did you write about the Trench Warfare? You also have some mistakes in your blurb.
Otherwise keep up the good work!