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Friday, 5 May 2017

Story Organizeir

Story organiser


  • Copy and paste paragraphs of The Kite’s Tale into the correct section.
  • Tell how each section helps the reader (the purpose of each section).

Sections
Copy and pasted story
Purpose
Title

The Frogs’ Race

name of the story
Orientation
One day, a group of frogs decided to make a race and get to the top of a high tower.
what-race to the topwho - frogs
where - the high tower
when-day
Problem
give them their support, but the race had just begun and everybody was already saying that the frogs would not get there: « It doesn’t make any sense going on! You’ll never reach the top of the tower! »
that the frogs were not
going to make it to the
top
Events
Little by little, the frogs felt disappointed and discouraged, except for one of them that continued to run. And everybody cried out: « Give up! Give up! You’ll never get to the top! » Listening repeatedly to these negative words led the frogs to abandon the race after all, except for the one frog that, despite what people were saying, and though alone and with great pain, continued to run and finally reached the top.
Everybody cried out out give up give up little by little the frogs felt disappointed.
Solution
Deeply astonished, the other frogs wanted to know how she had managed to do it. They came to her and asked her what her secret was.
And it was then that they found out that… she was deaf!
Take a healthy life attitude: Never to listen to people who are negative in their intentions. Be deaf to discouraging words and always follow your dreams to the end.
she did not listen to the people who said they couldn't do it

to identify the parts of a narrative



i learnt about topes and the structure of an narrative.I read the frogs's race and what  had to do was read the story and cut the story into paragraphs and put it on a template of which one goes in which.
I learnt with my group ES ( enormous spiders) and with Mr Wong

Thursday, 8 December 2016

words on flight

Christmas letter


Dear Mum and dad

This year at school I was a good student. In maths I have learnt numbers before and after, addition and subtraction to 10. For reading I learnt to read fluently. I love to read books. In writing I can write a story by myself. I know to put in capital letters and full stops.

At home I was a really good boy because I helped you with chores, cleaning my bedroom and I did the dishes all by myself. Therefore I will be very grateful  if you can buy me something from my wish list. These are things I would like:
  • Xbox
  • Lego
  • Goosebump book
  • Tablet


Love from  
Pua

Post, Air Mail, Letters, ...

Peter and the Wolf



Peter lives with his grandfather in his old house. They have a wall to protect them so the wolf can’t get in. When Peter  was feeding the duck he heard a noise coming out from the  forest.  It was a cat and a bird.  The bird was waiting for some bread but the `cat wants to eat the bird. Peter clapped his hands to scare the bird away. His grandfather came out and told him off , “don’t leave the gate open because the wolf will get in”. But the wolf came. The cat and the bird went up the tall tree to get away from the wolf. The poor duck got eaten by the wolf. But the wolf was still hungry. Peter climbed up the tree to save the cat and the bird. Peter used the rope to catch the wolf. Peter and the Hunters carried the wolf away. The bird and the cat lived happily ever after.




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Flight


Tuesday, 16 August 2016

Paper planes.

We made a paper plane. We folded the paper in half then we folded it again to make the nose of the plane. We had a challenge and battle to fly to see who gets the highest. Jan won and beat me. I made a batman wing plane. We threw the planes again and I won.



































We made a paper plane. We folded the paper in half then we folded it again to make the nose of the plane. We had a challenge and battle to fly to see who gets the highest. Jan won and beat me. I made a batman wing plane. We threw the planes again and I won.























We made a paper plane. We folded the paper in half then we folded it again to make the nose of the plane. We had a challenge and battle to fly to see who gets the highest. Jan won and beat me. I made a batman wing plane. We threw the planes again and I won.










































We made a paper plane. We folded the paper in half then we folded it again to make the nose of the plane. We had a challenge and battle to fly to see who gets the highest. Jan won and beat me. I made a batman wing plane. We threw the planes again and I won.











































We made a paper plane. We folded the paper in half then we folded it again to make the nose of the plane. We had a challenge and battle to fly to see who gets the highest. Jan won and beat me. I made a batman wing plane. We threw the planes again and I won.